http://music.globalbeatz.net/electronic-music-mp3/664

its what i came up with for the beat battle, but sisnce that never really went down, i was just looking for some feedback.

keep in mind that it is an instrumental, so it probably wouldn't be as good/entertaining as it would with some lyrics/vocals over it.

that said, let me know what you think. good, bad, you love it, you hate me, whatever.

thanks.

smooth little groove there.....got a good overall mix.....The only constructive criticism I would say is I'd like to hear the snare be a little phatter/bigger to put it out in front if u know what I mean, but Im real anal about snares for whatever reason, and actually the one u use works with that kick so it might all be down to taste.......I like how you used 2 different ones at times to accent and change it up tho.....the only other thing is that pad type high sound u use throughout, I didnt like it personally......nice little ditty though, keep it up-

what did u use to write this?


Piece

fl studio 4 + acid 4

thanks for the feedback, i wrote the entire thing with my headphones on, cause its easier to hear how the mixing sounds that way, but i'm not really superb at mixing/mastering anyway.

but again, thanks for the feedback man.

haha sounds like that sutff my boy dexstrumental used to make while we were robbo tripping.. big up tha oompah loompahs!